“Oh! Mother I love you”,
“Oh! Father I love you”;
The first love of early stage,
The innocent love of bird in a cage;
Hour by hour, the love ripen,
From sweet to sweetest, in a hyphen;
Still the first love of medium stage,
The maturing love of bird in open cage;
“Oh! Darling I love you”,
“Oh! Sweetheart I love you”;
The first love of grown stage,
The matured love of no cage;
Day by day, the love gets old,
Sweetly sourly that is gold;
The last love of grown stage,
The matured love of birdless open cage;
“Oh! Son I love you”,
“Oh! Daughter I love you”;
The last love of the last stage,
The oldest love of birdless cage.
“Oh! Father I love you”;
The first love of early stage,
The innocent love of bird in a cage;
Hour by hour, the love ripen,
From sweet to sweetest, in a hyphen;
Still the first love of medium stage,
The maturing love of bird in open cage;
“Oh! Darling I love you”,
“Oh! Sweetheart I love you”;
The first love of grown stage,
The matured love of no cage;
Day by day, the love gets old,
Sweetly sourly that is gold;
The last love of grown stage,
The matured love of birdless open cage;
“Oh! Son I love you”,
“Oh! Daughter I love you”;
The last love of the last stage,
The oldest love of birdless cage.
2 comments:
well!! beautifully written,
the way love changes in life is nicely described by the example of Bird and Cage.
u knw wat, when I was a child I used to tell my parents that i love u very much and I can't live without u, but as I grown up I still love my parents may be more than that time, but now I dn't show it to them as was in those days. Thats the typ of change comes in our life. We still love them a lot, but situation, burden of life comes in our way which makes us tuff from outside but from inside we are still the same innocent lover.
“Oh! Son I love you”,
“Oh! Daughter I love you”;
The last love of the last stage,
The oldest love of birdless cage.
I like the last lines, its a bit emotional ones...
well written ...keep writing more poems ...
Ya Farhan-"the bird and the cage" describes that how the love is bascially taking a turn.
Thanx for your aprreciation.
Its all bcoz of the aprreciation from you all that I tend to write such lines.
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